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2/1/20, 5:20 AM
The idea is very good, but the reading is so slow it gets literally boring and annoying to keep on reading, on most chapters I just skip the "lyrics" and the odd side "prequel" scenarios. They don't add anything significant to the story or the sexual arousal, so, why have them?. I think I would enjoy it more if the time used on the lyrics was cute short and the prequel almost completely eliminated. But I do re-read it.... just again, skipping all that
2/1/20, 5:17 AM
I wish this had been worked more... I know it's connected to the House Guest series and that makes it thousand times more interesting, there is so much ground that could be abuse, molested and fucked that I'm really annoyed there hasn't been any changes or new uploads yet.
2/1/20, 5:15 AM
The character of "Mother" is rather odd, at moments a little annoying but I think is understandable since it's a creepy powerful evolution of a depressed and devastated woman, thou I believe there was some divine/alien work in between that unfortunately was not explained, just barely slightly kinda hinted on. BUT, I love the chapter and the next one even more.
2/1/20, 5:12 AM
This is my favorite chapter of the House guest series, I hope to read more of these
Anonymous
2/1/20, 3:04 AM
very interested to see where this goes ! hope the next chapter comes soon !
Centuria
2/1/20, 2:45 AM
nice work, look forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
2/1/20, 2:36 AM
Excellent. Your work gets me off every time.
2/1/20, 1:44 AM
Wow! I loved this story, love the concept. Keep it up.
2/1/20, 1:24 AM
It's a hard read because there are so many grammatical errors such as sentence fragments, etc. within the sentences. I'm happy that you continued the story, but you need to edit the work before you submit so readers can make it through your work without so much effort.
Anonymous
1/31/20, 11:01 PM
I really hope there's a backup of his mind stored somewhere. alternatively, having Alec find a note explaining everything when it's too late would make this feel like a kinky episode of the Twilight Zone or possibly Black Mirror.