Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/15/25, 3:13 PM
so hot!!! great development of the characters too... look forward to the next chapter...
Anonymous
11/15/25, 3:00 PM
its hot ,i love it so much
JackOfFetish
11/15/25, 2:57 PM
I liked this story. I agree that there was some phrase that you could have used in a different way. But I like the way you lured the dad into having sex with his son and friend. It sound well done and realistic.
11/5/25, 7:14 PM
It was a great story, but I'm sad it had a bad ending and the twins had lost. I hope you'd consider writing an alternative ending where the twins do win, or at least escape safely

11/5/25, 11:46 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Thank you for the detailed reply! It's really interesting to hear how authors interpret their own stories, so thank you for sharing that as well. I will be in touch if I'll think of something! ~~(Technically, there's always the power of love _[cue Huey Lewis]_ but I guess it would be too simple)~~

11/9/25, 2:26 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Yay! I'll DM you! :)

11/15/25, 1:57 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Posted a bonus chapter so hopefully you enjoy that ☺️☺️
11/1/25, 2:38 AM
Would have loved to see a good ending and bad endings but it is your story. So I understand. Just feel bad for Jake when the other shoe drops.

11/15/25, 1:56 PM
@[Stonehammer](/user/show/964072) Posted a bonus chapter to give them a happy ending ☺️ the chapter before it could be considered the bad ending ☺️
10/25/25, 4:53 AM
I kind of feel bad for the twins

10/25/25, 6:36 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Same here. My heart's breaking for them. That said, excellent writing still! 👍

11/15/25, 1:55 PM
@[hunterlism](/user/show/10060533) Posted a bonus chapter to give them a happy ending ☺️
11/15/25, 12:05 PM
Love it❤️🔥🙏
8/11/25, 1:58 AM
i love this amazing story of domination and control! The idea of a combination of a drug and hypnosis working synergistically so effectively to provide a powerful tool for owning and training a slave is so so hot!! Cage did do an enthralling job of pacing Denton's transition. Unfortunately i do have some trouble getting around the moral/ethical problem with the transformation being totally non-consensual every step of the way. Clearly Cage intends the transformation to be a permanent and apparently continuing to be knowingly non-consensual. i grant that as a boss Denton was a total jerk, but in my judgement he doesn't deserve his entire life to be turned upside down. I think a little karma along the way and demotion or firing would have been more appropriate. Fortunately for me, i am okay with taking enjoyment from some parts of a fantasy and ignoring others.

Throne
8/11/25, 4:57 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment. In real life, I believe in consensual relationships with set limits. Sometimes when fantasizing, however, I can't resist imagining an unwilling person trapped in a nasty situation with no way to escape. Glad you can mentally edit, to enjoy the parts that work for you.

11/15/25, 9:22 AM
@Throne Actually, i am totally with you. If a story is hot and touching on all my kinks, i am completely forgiving of non-consensual fantasy. i am also very intrigued in real life with the possibilities of mind control, and would love to experience various forms of loss of control -- so much so that i would with right persons and with sufficient prior communication on hard limits, i would happily agree to consensual non-consent activities. I want to know what it would feel like to give up all mental and physical control to another person -- somewhat like the newly resident doctors induced 'death' just to experience it in the movie 'Flatliners'.
11/15/25, 6:30 AM
Great to see this series back, I love the way you write Sebastian's dreams,, they're super hot
11/15/25, 4:01 AM
super hot. Love a good underwear transformation story.