Recent Comments

Your soldier
1/8/20, 11:35 AM
great chapter i cannot wait for more!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 7:04 AM
i think you did a great job swizz! write for yourself not other people. there are always going to be differing opinions but if you are happy with it you will have an audience dark or not. please continue your amazing contributions to the site!
fingrfethr
1/8/20, 6:31 AM
Thanks for finding a new angle and writing the characters so well. Bravo!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 5:10 AM
I think it just needed a bit more smut, this is after all a bad guy wins story.
Anonymous
1/8/20, 4:30 AM
I loved it. Your protoganist doesnt even realize he's changed. So hot!!!
jackson
1/8/20, 3:56 AM
so i started reading stories at the mcstoryarchive, and found that I actually got turned on more by the gay stories than the straight and lesbian ones. which led me here. and i jsut wanted to say that this story was exceptional in my opinion. thank you for sharing it.
Anonymous
1/8/20, 2:03 AM
More pleaseeee
1/7/20, 11:57 PM
Can't wait to see where this is goingl amused by the constant shifts between normal and tranced states, and how they're placed within the narrative.
1/7/20, 11:47 PM
I'm kind'a fond of a slower burn, but the elements of the story, thus far, are really engaging
1/7/20, 11:36 PM
I'm really getting into the subtlety of the indoctrination process; Master must really be skilled in the "art" of NLP. Another great start to your usual storycraft!