Recent Comments

11/15/25, 5:37 PM
we want the new chapter
11/15/25, 5:14 PM
@nothingville the third time through was the charm. You might say i am addicted to this story 😀
11/13/25, 9:54 AM
Lol I was turn off by this story to the extreme XD not because it's bad, but I can't take it seriously because I call my good uncle, uncle John.

11/14/25, 11:57 PM
@[JRZTT](/user/show/14915) Would it have been fine if the uncle had a different name?

11/15/25, 7:57 AM
@[iDubbOldChubb](/user/show/10037179) Yeah XD but this is just my internal feeling, this is your story. It's good, I just can't ... to it XD

11/15/25, 4:24 PM
@[JRZTT](/user/show/14915) Okay cool. Thanks for the feedback.
Anonymous
11/15/25, 3:13 PM
so hot!!! great development of the characters too... look forward to the next chapter...
Anonymous
11/15/25, 3:00 PM
its hot ,i love it so much
JackOfFetish
11/15/25, 2:57 PM
I liked this story. I agree that there was some phrase that you could have used in a different way. But I like the way you lured the dad into having sex with his son and friend. It sound well done and realistic.
11/5/25, 7:14 PM
It was a great story, but I'm sad it had a bad ending and the twins had lost. I hope you'd consider writing an alternative ending where the twins do win, or at least escape safely

11/5/25, 11:46 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Thank you for the detailed reply! It's really interesting to hear how authors interpret their own stories, so thank you for sharing that as well. I will be in touch if I'll think of something! ~~(Technically, there's always the power of love _[cue Huey Lewis]_ but I guess it would be too simple)~~

11/9/25, 2:26 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Yay! I'll DM you! :)

11/15/25, 1:57 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Posted a bonus chapter so hopefully you enjoy that ☺️☺️
11/1/25, 2:38 AM
Would have loved to see a good ending and bad endings but it is your story. So I understand. Just feel bad for Jake when the other shoe drops.

11/15/25, 1:56 PM
@[Stonehammer](/user/show/964072) Posted a bonus chapter to give them a happy ending ☺️ the chapter before it could be considered the bad ending ☺️
10/25/25, 4:53 AM
I kind of feel bad for the twins

10/25/25, 6:36 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Same here. My heart's breaking for them. That said, excellent writing still! 👍

11/15/25, 1:55 PM
@[hunterlism](/user/show/10060533) Posted a bonus chapter to give them a happy ending ☺️
11/15/25, 12:05 PM
Love it❤️🔥🙏