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Meaner Nook
1/4/20, 12:09 AM
This is one of the hottest stories on this site in a long while. Lots of hypno, lots of farts. Not enough stories with that content on the site, and most with it don't have nearly enough. The concept of the Mind Kit has a lot of potential, too, and it seems well-used here. Spelling and readability is on-point. All-in-all, shit, amazing work. Makes sense, though, coming from the author who wrote one of my other favorite stories on here. Please, more content from you!
Lusty Stallion
1/3/20, 11:56 PM
Fucking loved it man! wow!
Swizzington
1/3/20, 10:55 PM
Also, Martin, thanks for the tip! I have discovered a new theme that I enjoy a lot more :-)
Anonymous
1/3/20, 10:26 PM
This was amazing! Please make more
Anonymous
1/3/20, 7:23 PM
everything about this falls right up my aesthetic and i absolutely love it already! cant wait for more
Anonymous
1/3/20, 6:27 PM
very fun reading.
Swizzington
1/3/20, 6:21 PM
Good observation, nycboot, and I understand why you would think that. However, it is the eyeglasses that Chester designed that are doing most of the heavy lifting here. The exact nature of Todd's telepathic abilities will be explained in greater detail in chapter 7.
Anonymous
1/3/20, 5:41 PM
I agree something is going to overload in him, even with the serum.
Mdlftr
1/3/20, 4:41 PM
Well written, surprisingly intriguing task-oriented story! It's reminding me of Disney World's "Tower of Terror" ride - the 1920s ghostly hotel.
nycboot
1/3/20, 4:36 PM
Hey again Swizz, According what I've read, Todd has enslaved: Chester, Amelia, Mitch, Joe, Shawn, Mike, Bethany, Jessica, and Mike. That's 9 people over which he keeps tabs. Isn't the neural switchboard inside his head approaching overload?