Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:29 PM
This story was incredible!! Inventive and hot!!!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:23 PM
damn I wish I was Joey..
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:23 PM
What makes it interesting is that the protagonist is also affected!
Anonymous
12/21/19, 4:19 PM
Would love to read more, but the writing is blah. Did you even proof your story?
Anonymous
12/21/19, 3:38 PM
Loving this! Hoping there's going to be some kilt fucking. There is not enough kilt porn out there for a Scotsman like me!
Stroppy author
12/21/19, 3:03 PM
Edit this ending so they take him back to the frat house and give him the antidote...and re-enslave him, again and again as part of his week of hell. Clueless that he's ever been captured, his hell week goes on for months
12/21/19, 11:19 AM
@A Voyeur Fan - Thanks :) To achieve branches converging like you describe, branches could contain hyperlinks to existing chapters, or such links or instructions could be added afterwards (perhaps when a lot of the story has been contributed already). Anyway maybe I'm overthinking it at this stage. Looking forward to new chapters :)
Anonymous
12/21/19, 10:17 AM
This is such a hot series. Love the descriptions during the hot and heavy parts.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 7:10 AM
I very much liked the first Part and now the second is well written and very arousing too. To the options, since the hunters aren-t Sure where Jeffrey really is, why not let take one of the sexually actiive guys guns and hunt the Hinter, even if only as a Distractions to flee. How ever it will continud i am exited. Please write more.
Anonymous
12/21/19, 6:20 AM
agree with the previous comment ... love the way the series is going .... thing s which are unique to this story .. keeps it interesting .... continue please