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joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/18/19, 8:22 AM
not bad, I like the story, but, part of me wished that Omen was still gay as well or at least that it was clear he was still gay
12/18/19, 5:17 AM
Clickbaiting is not what the tags are for. Its fine as a hint in synopsis but as an actual tag, no, I think its wrong.
AgingAthlete
12/18/19, 3:31 AM
Thanks for the comments. Snuff: well, I did a bit of clickbaiting here. I frankly don't like snuff stories as they take things a bit too far for my tastes. That said, I liked the idea of *toying* with the concept, which is what this is. Apologies to anyone hoping for a death. That said, now I am thinking of an actual snuff story where the snuffed sub comes back as a very angry, and powerful, ghost top. How does that sound? Short: I was working towards a sort of 'O. Henry' kind of thing: short, sweet and surprising. Also, I thought the hidden dialog (see original story) might get tedious for the reader if it went too long.
12/18/19, 2:49 AM
I really love the idea and format of the story here, but I feel like it could be just a hair longer. Maybe there could be more hints to that "snuff" situation past of the suspect's refutal, or maybe there could be a more detailed sex scene near the end. Granted, the latter would be harder considering that you're only using dialogue to propel the story, but check out Wesley Bracken's "Letters from Prison" to see how he does it. Again, this is an awesome idea, and I hope you keep running with it!
Dec 16, 2019
Geoff M
12/18/19, 2:32 AM
Great premise! i would love to read more about his dad serving and obeying in humiliating ways!
12/18/19, 2:06 AM
Excellent story. Great pup transformations on both of them. And I vote pups only.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
12/18/19, 1:28 AM
I agree
Anonymous
12/18/19, 1:09 AM
This is is super hot. More please!
Dec 17, 2019
Anonymous
12/17/19, 10:45 PM
so hot!!!!!
Dec 16, 2019
Anonymous
12/17/19, 9:29 PM
Hot story. Slave dad stories are the best.