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Anonymous
1/7/20, 6:59 PM
Love your story
JerkinBeforeWork
1/7/20, 6:58 PM
One of my favorite stories for a nice jerk. Thanks dude!
Growinggeek@gmail.com
1/7/20, 6:37 PM
This was a great continuation, great job!
Growinggeek@gmail.com
1/7/20, 6:31 PM
I really liked it - I only wish it'd been longer! Can't wait for more
Anonymous
1/7/20, 6:28 PM
Is there going to be a time skip in the The Further Adventures of a Mind Controller? I'm also not sure how involved this cast is going to be there, but it'd be nice if we get to see this cast being a bit older and see how their enslavement has been over the years.
Anonymous
1/7/20, 4:28 PM
love it
Anonymous
1/7/20, 4:25 PM
WOW, amazing. Is this the end or will you continue?
Anonymous
1/7/20, 3:19 PM
Reading the comments has been as entertaining as reading the story!! Sheesh!! It's erotic fiction, boys and girls. Calm the fuck down!!!!
New Fan
1/7/20, 3:15 PM
Also, regarding the out of characterness with Todd, I did notice that as well, but didn't feel to point it out at all because I did get that you were kinda going with the absolute power corrupts angle. And to be honest, I did still see glimmers of Todd's sadistic side throughout the epilogue. (mainly the micropenis stuff that he did to the men of the school) so while he was neutered, so to speak, he still has the dominating trait the we loved about him from the start. I also think that part of the reason why people think Todd went "soft" at the end is because of how much the other p.o.v. characters revere him so much at the end and are seemingly content with their lives, which gives an illusion that Todd is lenient with his subjects be ause theyre all happy, instead of feeling oppressed. But thats the beauty of the ending of this series to me, the mind fuck that Todd did to the student body completely eliminated their will to resist.
New Fan
1/7/20, 3:00 PM
Hey Swizz, I completely understand, its just the complete sadist in me that wanted to read it. I think I (and a few others here, perhaps) was very invested in this entire series that I couldn't help wanting to change and add more things to make it so much better. Its all about that desire to make things perfect. Its just natural to always want to make something better, maybe even you felt the same way as you wrote the chapters. The bottomline is, I'm happy where the series started and I'm satisfied on how ir concluded, no matter how many minor squabbles I may have. I wish you the best for the New Year and good luck on your future projects and whatever else you have going on!