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toy #4
11/17/19, 11:05 PM
it can't wait for the next two chapters (Captain's downfall and showing off the harvested). It's expecting even more surprises.
Amazing
11/17/19, 10:41 PM
Truly the hottest story I've read in a very very long time!
Anonymous
11/17/19, 10:06 PM
just found this so damn good keep it going
Anonymous
11/17/19, 10:02 PM
I love these subtle slow transformation stories. Seeing the assimilation of men one by one is so hot.
11/17/19, 7:49 PM
Simply wonderful.
Anonymous
11/17/19, 5:44 PM
This was incredibly hot.
Anonymous
11/17/19, 5:44 PM
Your best work yet! I love it!
Anonymous
11/17/19, 5:12 PM
Each chapter as good as the previous. They are fairly short, but that keeps us eager to read more! Really nice work. Thank you. I wish my name was Jake!
Anonymous
11/17/19, 3:57 PM
Excellent
LongtimeFan
11/17/19, 3:09 PM
I always know something amazing in store when a new Derek Williams story shows up--and you KILLED IT on this one! The mental transformation, the description of each guy changing into a mindless musclehead despite their different body types, the casual use of "we" until the reader realizes WHY it's all first-person plural...all brilliant. Thank you! :D