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9/19/25, 2:49 PM
This story continues to grab and hold my attention. Great work with this mind control concept!
9/19/25, 2:05 PM
That was surprisingly sweet. Love the was he addressed Kyle's issues, how actually BDSM terms and knowledge played into it, and how you can tell Zeke is very good at his job. The twins were an addedv bonus, and i like how they were handled. (Betting pool open on whether he actually goes for the Daddy or not)
9/18/25, 7:43 AM
GH ID 173557

9/19/25, 11:04 AM
@[nd86](/user/show/10044687) Hey there nd86! Thanks so much for your comment :) I’ve just sent you a little gift, hope you enjoy it!
9/19/25, 2:53 AM
OMG, I can't believe I missed the last chapter of this story. This was an absolute adventure and a pleasure to read. I kind of feel bad Bright, who ended up being the only single pup in the pack if I tracked things correctly. If you ever decide to write a spin-off, it would be interesting to see a prequel, maybe how Sparky joined the pack. Either way, I enjoyed it immensely and thank you for sticking with the story until the happy end :)

Anonymous
9/19/25, 3:50 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Thank you! And Bright is married to Titan! Ruby is single. But he prefers it that way right now. We might explore his relationship status in the future.
9/19/25, 2:32 AM
Great story, I hope at the end he will discover what he was turned into and will be returned back to an unconscious state.
9/19/25, 12:25 AM
The best, hottest chapter yet. Trevor's fall is spectacular to witness.
9/19/25, 12:19 AM
Great start and a slow paced story. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter to find out who's involved and how it all plays out. I want to see the story from Jay and Aaron's perspective. I hope there's some hot sex after the final brainwashing.
9/19/25, 12:02 AM
oh dayumn Seth my name :P
Anonymous
9/18/25, 10:07 PM
Everyday I check back to see if the next parts out yet… so excited!!
9/18/25, 8:30 PM
Loving this so far, going to hit the next chapters now