Recent Comments

11/14/25, 11:12 AM
So hot!!! Love the idea of hardened soldiers being turned into suited servant!😍:hot_face::heart_eyes:
11/14/25, 10:40 AM
Finally finally Kyle (Zeke actually) gets to throw actual hypnosis into this, and it was so cool! Loved this chapter, and it's interesting to see the threads start to connect.:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
11/14/25, 10:35 AM
I can't wait until tomorrow then....
11/14/25, 8:06 AM
He's gotta get those other guys now. 👀
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11/14/25, 2:23 AM
Wow, you make extra part from tumblr, don't expect it, the previous parts already evil, and you make this part more evil and I love how it end.
11/13/25, 3:48 PM
I appreciated the way you weaved the worldbuilding in here! It felt very natural and believable even without all the details, and it made me curious what orc society looks like with its human slaves. It was a good spiral of degradation—very active on the sub’s part, while I usually like to write the dom forcing the sub into positions that degrade him, but that worked great with the armpit stuff. All in all, very fun, and good writing too.

11/13/25, 11:00 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you very much for the praise! I always want my stories to feel fleshed out, so I love to see that my worldbuilding is being complimented. A further look at the orc society may very well be in the cards for the future. I’m also quite happy that the process of degradation felt good to you. I always want a good spiral that’s believable within the context of the story.
11/13/25, 10:05 PM
Hoping you return soon!
11/13/25, 8:18 PM
Fucking hot
11/13/25, 7:38 PM
Love how you made what's essentially a series of short stories leading up to one big finale.

11/13/25, 7:47 PM
@[FletcherSchiffmann](/user/show/10052125) Glad you liked it! I was originally gonna release it as several short stories but changed my mind and glad i did i think this way works better.
11/13/25, 7:16 PM
Congrats, I can't tell you hom much I like your story. Can't wait for the next chapter.