Recent Comments

10/20/19, 4:28 PM
Really would love to see more of this! Very hot!
mattbarradell@hotmail.co.uk
10/20/19, 4:00 PM
thank you again for the feedback, it's honestly keeping me going and I'm loving writing again! Just submitted Part V!
SirD
10/20/19, 1:50 PM
i like the way this is going. can think of several things that can happen next with Tom.
SirD
10/20/19, 1:43 PM
Just like everyone who already commented, i loved the story and cant wait for chapter 2
Ruffcub
10/20/19, 8:50 AM
I've always loved your stories so it's great to see you posting again. Hope there's another part soon!
Jul 23, 2019
Anonymous
10/20/19, 7:52 AM
A great story. I would love you to write one about a straight handsome young college sports guy, who is also a bit shy. His penis only average but worked on by an ugly guy and a middle aged woman or other females people he would never normally let see him. kidnapped or something totally humiliated pubes changed
bigfan
10/20/19, 7:08 AM
this whole series speaks to my turn ons so much in terms of masc-fem contrast, not to mention that you have quality non-cringe writing which is what normally distracts me with online stories like this. Amazing! (p.s One thing I might like in the future would be to add a little more attention to the feminization transformation in a parker-like character. I actually wasn't 100% sure if he was transforming at some points? I feel bad even writing this because I really just wanted to comment in how awesome and inventive your work is but figure I'd throw it out there! keep it up!)
Oct 13, 2019
10/20/19, 6:23 AM
I was a fan of your work when you first started posting erotic stories. Loved the Pizza series and I'm glad your'e continuing again. I would love to see the other characters back at work again!
Anonymous
10/20/19, 4:58 AM
lots of possibilities. I hope Daniel would take advantage of his powers. Not just vanilla use it. Thanks for writing !
Anonymous
10/20/19, 4:14 AM
If you turn this into a series, maybe a good title would be "Moonshine".