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10/20/19, 3:38 AM
Very well done. please, keep writing redneck stuff.
Anonymous
10/20/19, 3:08 AM
love it
10/20/19, 2:49 AM
This is interesting. I do hope Daniel gains confidence, becoming in charge. But yeah this is fun.
Anonymous
10/20/19, 2:06 AM
this was great! loved it, well done. please make more!
nycboot
10/20/19, 1:58 AM
Very nice! I like the gradual and smooth transformation (the subject is aware but powerless to control it). Good work!!
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10/20/19, 1:50 AM
I am sensing a wayward thought that unleashes a new power in Tom that Daniel could lose control to. Hot....
nycboot
10/20/19, 12:02 AM
I was reading this and getting really into it. I kept noticing that the author was using the same phraseology from another story I like, **[Fullfilling Their Destiny](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/105311)**. After I finished the chapter I checked - and realized it's the same author, hehe! I get what you're after and I like it and it's satisfying. For your next story - perhaps you can work on an individual, and as he gradually transforms (because making it gradual increases the hotness factor) he slowly takes on the attributes that makes him want to be part of a pack. Perhaps he doesn't realize it at first (like Scout in the story above), or perhaps he has internal battles pitting his new instincts against his former instincts. I think it could be a hot thing - and of course, you're the one to write it! Thanks so much for all that you have given to us!
10/19/19, 10:24 PM
yes that WM ranking is not a mistake . just something about procedural technical scenes exciting tickle my imagination. add in the character interaction and the build-up of tension even if there's no on-screen payoff. Plus World building is lore p*** this is completely indulgent and completely unnecessary and I am so into it you do a really good job with the characterization of the senator from when she appears on screen. Right down to when she goes from perhaps very relatable and sympathetic 2 horrifyingly cold and monstrous but it always feels very succinct and to the point. Which lets us get a feel for her as a very calculating and intelligent mind. It feels as if we're up against some pretty scary opponents and it makes us want to know what's going on with the organization's even more. we now know that recycling is a one way trip. and these people are very Adept at Con Artistry or at least manipulating perception in organizations. it's also interesting that people are bit more informed so not every single person whose exposed is necessarily going to be a victim . So that's interesting to
Oct 19, 2019
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10/19/19, 9:47 PM
this was great! loved it, well done
Anonymous
10/19/19, 9:46 PM
This is my favorite Spandexlad story. Great job! I always enjoy stories in which all the characters are introduced in the first few paragraphs of the story.