Recent Comments

lloyd311@aol.com
10/17/19, 3:53 AM
Great story idea, well written (and I'm happy to work with you on your English if you'd like, but actually you got it pretty good). But yeah, good stuff! Thanks... LLOYD
10/17/19, 1:02 AM
A great ending!
10/17/19, 12:17 AM
Please Continue!
jockedguy
10/16/19, 10:58 PM
Fantastic writing, great pace - even liked the alternate endings. Very clever, and very sexy.
Loli
10/16/19, 10:15 PM
If I knew how to draw well, I would adapt this to comics, but of course I did not draw well because my damn and danced
Anonymous
10/16/19, 8:47 PM
I love the implications for the afterstory, since the reversion was manual and not automatic, meaning these bros are all stuck as bicurious sex maniacs. And if Cole wasnt careful with his coding, they'll be partying together every year or even potentially every night together from now on.
Anonymous
10/16/19, 7:26 PM
the story was amazing,btw. very well thought out and written
Anonymous
10/16/19, 7:25 PM
This was super hot! The story and worldbuilding was really enjoyable and super well done. I'm so excited for the next one
Anonymous
10/16/19, 6:49 PM
soooo awesome!
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10/16/19, 5:42 PM
This was super hot! The story and worldbuilding was really enjoyable and super well done, and the idea of people being slipped into bodies that have their own needs and limitations is a sexy one, with a lot of potential. I liked the gradual transformation too. Made it a lot more fun and enjoyable to read. If you took up this premise again with a later story, it might be fun to see several sex scenes, all at different stages of the person gradually adapting to their new body. That could be a fun way to really explore how much they're giving in to the new body's needs. Either way: bravo, this was really good!