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8/10/25, 3:46 AM
this is an awesome piece! Hope to see how the dynamic evolves, also the kind of story I always hope for the tables to get turned. Love the focus on the pit play too!
8/8/25, 7:54 PM
Unexpectedly wholesome! It's refreshing and sweet to see someone not taking advantage of such power and working on saving the accidental victim. I can't help but wonder what other kinds of changes we will see in the next chapters and I'm really excited for that!

8/9/25, 3:21 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I enjoy mixing both wholesome and dark fantasies, sometimes in the same story. I think my (our?) kink for hypnosis invites that kind of blend of ethical and unethical, and is something to be aware of. In this story, expect to meet all kinds of characters, from those who want to be good people, to those who want power and control, to those who just want to have lots of sex. No spoilers (because I haven't even fully outlined the climax yet!) but I would expect an ending typical for my stories, in terms of who wins and who gets fucked. I hope you enjoy. :)

8/10/25, 3:36 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I think by now it's safe to say our kink and I blame you and your great stories for that. Hearing this is going to have one of your classic story endings makes me much calmer already. I'm sure I'll enjoy it ^_^
8/10/25, 12:42 AM
I really do hope there is no chastity, it feels pointless and just mean in this case, especially when he is already given commands that he can't cum without permission. AND, as said above, edging is a good training tool. I also hope that there is no shaving, let him be natural in his body form. I do think some pet play would be fun. I also really love how he is still studying and going to the gym and is being given commands for "Mike to act and be normal", so good. I really do hope that in time others get to be trained into good boys for Josh. He needs a stable, hehe. Sooo yeah, I have reread this story multiple times and I keep on coming back to it. I really love the set up. I especially love us getting in both their heads, its so sexy to enjoy both the master and his thoughts and the good boy and his. No matter what developments happen in the future, this chapter is marvelous and sexy. And thank you for it.
8/10/25, 12:24 AM
I don't think Mike should have his dick locked physically. He can't cum without permission already, but it's good for him to edge for his Master.
8/9/25, 9:39 PM
Chastity seems like a fun development. I think leaning more into the hot thongs is fun. Maybe add some petplay? Great start to the story so far!
8/9/25, 8:37 PM
Great story, loved the POV from both Mike and Josh. Love more humiliation felt by Mike, that he’s forced to reporting back to Josh. Maybe students on campus notice his tented boner in his pants, his “boner boy” nickname sticks. Daily after his AM workout he sits in the last stall of the locker room, can’t help but to work the gloryhole, typically sucking off 12 guys, cum is breakfast of champions and loaded with protein before class or maybe getting caught checking out the cocks on guys in the gym shower, conflicted by this, but still straight mike. Keep up the outstanding and hot writing.
8/9/25, 7:39 PM
I liked your story and the slow build to conversion. I agree with the shaving his body to show his build. I also agree that more frat boys show be added; maybe with Mike's aid. I don't like the idea of caging as he has already been mentally caged. Since Mike started this study for the money maybe he is put to use for money - along with those he recruits. Lots of possibilities!
8/9/25, 6:04 PM
Well done on the pacing and the progressive buildup of Mike's conditioning. As to what more to do with him, I'd recommend: - nipple sensitivity. Put emphasis on the size of his pecs. - greater desire to show of his muscular body. ++highly++ encourage him to remove his body hair. Really helps highlight his build. But also make him want to pose and flex. - encourage Mike to get a dildo for anal and oral training on his own. Perhaps this could even cause Mike to get a plug to help keep his Master's cum inside. - maybe having his programming bleed out in other subtle ways. Maybe he starts taking notice of attractive guys around campus. Or maybe he alters his regular clothes for tight or revealing clothing? - Switch from being addressed as Sir to Master. - And lastly, if you want, applying chastity would be amazing to read about. This is more about the physical then mental in this case. Mike is mentally locked as is. He is bound to his master and can't cum without permission. Chastity in this case, restricts a physical factor to amplify a mental one. Without access to his, he will endeavor to get his Master's even more. Which aligns with his programming. He wants his Master's cock and cum, he doesn't need his. It reinforces his condition and position.
Jul 19, 2023
8/9/25, 5:42 PM
Something evil this way cums. (i hope!)
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8/9/25, 5:36 PM
Well, nipple sensitivity training is a must I’d say, with how much Josh seems to take interest in Mike’s nips. Get Josh to train his pecs into a pair of worthy muscle tits, and his nips to be so sensitive that it’d be a torture to wear shirt with how they keep stimulating his nips just from rubbing against the fabric from everyday routine.