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9/6/19, 9:23 PM
> Erotic, romantic, fascinating, and very well written! > Thank you! I wasn't sure how this story was going to be received -- like our narrator, I was concerned about the plot being episodic rather than linear (I was trying to make it feel mythological) and of course the thing is jamb-packed with symbols. And of course, I always beat myself up when a story is tell, not show. If I illustrated every dramatic beat of this story, it would be a novel. (And we wouldn't get Chiron until at least 2/3 of the way through it!) Still, I'm glad you liked it. I could easily revisit this world -- I have an adversary in mind! -- but we'll see what happens.
9/6/19, 9:15 PM
Oh, I also wanted to add I like the subliminal method of hypnosis he is using. The pavloian training was super hot and so was the sleep learning that he did for them with attraction. Those two features are very nice and sexy additions. This series is really sexy. To the point that it has as a concept become part of my own personal fun. :)
9/6/19, 9:13 PM
I'm not sure what to think about this story, except to say that it was an enjoyable and positive read. It wasn't exactly sexy but it was very well done. So yeah thumbs up on this work.
Papa Werebear
9/6/19, 9:05 PM
That! That was a truly remarkable story! Erotic, romantic, fascinating, and very well written! Thank you!
Anonymous
9/6/19, 8:44 PM
looking forward to it
9/6/19, 6:17 PM
"Wow, a new story by Mr. Absman? A must read." *haven't read it yet*
Anonymous
9/6/19, 5:41 PM
I love this whole story. Thank you for writing it! but will it really be the last chapter? please continue
Anonymous
9/6/19, 5:19 PM
Amazing! Very well-crafted and written!
Willie Cici
9/6/19, 4:50 PM
I loved it. Sexy and though-provocative. I read it twice to make sure I caught all the nuance.
nycboot
9/6/19, 3:57 PM
I too am hoping that Unit Dan finds a solution to this problem. It's really amazing how much character (and therefore empathy) has poor Dan been endowed with. Once nanobots have been introduced into a human body, I don't think there's a way to get rid of them since they've altered the structure. So the best that could be hoped for is a revised social structure, no more forced conversions, and Unit Dan will have to remain Unit Dan, unless jeep has a Deus ex machina in store for us...