Recent Comments

jeep4191@gmail.com
8/31/19, 9:34 PM
Malskin, I think you will be pleased where unit Dan ends up at the end of this little story... thanks for continuing yo read! Bulk, glad you liked it! Hope you keep reading!
Anonymous
8/31/19, 9:16 PM
aww! that's really sweet ❤️
blankbot
8/31/19, 9:11 PM
Short, sweet, and highly erotic. Nicely done.
Bulk
8/31/19, 9:08 PM
OMG Classic Sci-Fi plot twist!! YES
malskin
8/31/19, 8:38 PM
I for one hopes that GREAT LEADER, BLESSED BE, find out about a misfuntioning Unit 2 and sends an earlier that expected download to that unit and totally corrects its programing, in facts makes it the lead and head of all unit 2's ye again have to say great writing
Aug 31, 2019
jeep4191@gmail.com
8/31/19, 7:51 PM
GREAT short story! Nice, quick story arc!
Anonymous
8/31/19, 4:23 PM
Great finish to a great series. Love your writing!
Anonymous
8/31/19, 2:00 PM
Would love this to continue! I love the thought of becoming a mindless suited office drone.
8/31/19, 2:19 AM
Another excellent part! I feel a little sad for the aunt unit, and that poor unit Dan didn't recognize what was happening until it was too late. Interesing that the unit became a normal male unit 7. I guess they are the only type of 7 needed so it makes sense
8/31/19, 2:18 AM
Ooh, the units malfunction gets more interesting. And now it's learned some of how it works and the effects it has. Do the other units that it swaps with also become defective? Or is their designation simply replaced and they continue on as a normal unit of their new type?