Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/29/19, 5:16 AM
I'm kind of sad the next one didn't continue this vein. Your story here had something unique with the relationship dynamics and power struggle. Obviously the protagonist is a "bad guy" but they win in real life and I frankly thought it was incredibly hot having him win here. Him being the one to break Leo would have been hotter than the karmic twist most stories have here, but that's just my twisted preference on a gay mind control site. You do YOU, please, fuck us comments and please please keep writing more stories. Excited to be Leo whatever you write lol
ForgottenCradle
8/29/19, 4:46 AM
beautiful
8/29/19, 3:58 AM
When Mikey started his transformation, I paused thinking, "too soon, no resistance." But as I read just a little more I thought, "perfect timing and great how he just gives in" And boy does he give in. Well done!
ForgottenCradle
8/29/19, 3:54 AM
oooh,I like this plot twist excited to read more
8/29/19, 3:24 AM
Most of the chapter I found it not exciting and really boring, but the last part, or last story, however you wanna describe it was fucking amazing and I'm keeping the bookmark just to re-read that part
8/29/19, 3:22 AM
favorite, I keep on re-reading it
Anonymous
8/29/19, 3:11 AM
I love the story, it was at times erotic and other times deeply affecting. While most authors on here tend towards erotic story telling and revenge fantasies, you went above and beyond, giving a lonely "potentially Bi" guy a fulfilling life with a lover, even if there was tragedy, it wasn't out of malice, just imperfect reality of life. You should continue this story as a series. Allow others like Jake, another chance at another life. They don't all have to be gay porn stars in the end, the sky is the limit for Relivit.
Willie Cici
8/29/19, 3:09 AM
I'm loving this series. I'm in awe of 'episodic writers'. I have a hard time writing series. When I find a series that keeps me intrigued, I keep reading. Have fun and keep writing. You have a least one person reading.
8/29/19, 3:06 AM
this is my favorite chapter