Recent Comments

8/22/19, 10:58 AM
You are a genuine and constant inspiration to me, and have been for a long time, not just to my erotic fiction, but to my other work as well. A hot story with a perfect ending and something to say is a rare combination of attributes.
Anonymous
8/22/19, 10:43 AM
That was pretty funny to be honest
8/22/19, 8:48 AM
Lots of exciting possibilities. Looking forward to more.
Aug 20, 2019
Bmax
8/22/19, 8:10 AM
excellent. more please.
8/22/19, 6:24 AM
I have a few more adventures planned, but none written as of yet. I hope to keep them all short, and more or less self-contained. I'll do my best to keep them lighter in tone and a bit funny too--but the eventual arc might darken a bit, as Nick is corrupted by his power over his daddy--and other men in their orbit.
Bimarguy
8/22/19, 1:08 AM
really enjoyed this story , was hoping he was changed into a pup by one if his friends but great story
8/22/19, 12:45 AM
It's like porn set in the Bewitched Universe; I like it!
8/22/19, 12:21 AM
A promising opening; could use more of a slow burn, IMHO.
8/22/19, 12:18 AM
nycboot - Yeah ... I can get weird. And I've been in contact with Absman420 about where I intend to take the story. Honestly, it has me worried. I'm worried cause I'm going in a direction that I've never gone before, and (I believe) nobody has gone before. It actually may turn off some readers. I'm not saying this is the definite path. There have been many times that story plots have changed as I've been hammering at the keys. But overall, I think the pay-off will be worth it. Here's hoping with fingers crossed.
nycboot
8/21/19, 11:55 PM
Sometimes "creepy" can be off-putting. But not here at all. I think the creep-factors greatly **adds** to the suspense. I know rubbrsome can get into some weird stuff and I expect he'll put some of that into this story. It's amusing: it like another take on the original Pollination (which I've read many times) so it's sort of the same and yet very different in terms of style and "perception of the world." Absman420's original was pretty much direct and straight to the point. But rubbrsome's take is like a technicolor 70mm digital movie - so much more detail which is so carefully designed to lure the reader into the author's control. (It's also like the original Brain Feed and Brain Feed 2, same story, different point of view.) I look forward to more as I devour each installment multiple times!