Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/11/19, 7:30 PM
with all the negativity of this story, I get it. it draws the parallels of what was expected, who they were, what they deserved, and who they became. it's not the happiest story, but a truthful one, if you can see the metephors encapsulated in the writing. some of the most honest writing isn't always the most comfortable, and that is why I think this story gets so much hate.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 7:28 PM
i was hoping for the son to use 12 pack of water to turn his father not for him to recede back in to the closet . - good story but u satisfied with the ending.... unless theres a part two that makes it all better( HINT, HINT)
Anonymous
8/11/19, 7:20 PM
I have to say, it felt like an interesting concept at first, more of a horror story than a sexy story, but right now? The Mayor has become a boring invincible villain and there seems no point to keep reading, as you just know he'll get his way. He's this town's Pennywise and he needs to be taken down. HARD.
8/11/19, 7:08 PM
Need moar! Need moar! :)
8/11/19, 7:08 PM
Too bad the father wasnt traimed too.
Anonymous
8/11/19, 5:55 PM
I kinda wish the statue stuff wouldve gone longer. And i liked it when the collector relinquished control during the statuefying phase
Anonymous
8/11/19, 5:54 PM
Honestly why are you even writing this crap
8/11/19, 5:18 PM
Hi Heru Kane, You've given me an excellent idea
Oxstorm
8/11/19, 5:13 PM
I really liked the transformation aspect of it and hope you do more of those
agingathlete1953@protonmail.com
8/11/19, 4:30 PM
So weird and bizarre in a good sort of way 😜