Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/4/19, 10:19 PM
Its great! maybe you can bring a bit of transformation to the story. I would love to see that all people, who are altered or corrupted by Landon, will be free after there fall trip or at least that it is not permanent. It would ruin my image of Landon, that friendly cool guy who helps others. Can't wait to read the next parts!
Anonymous
8/4/19, 9:44 PM
more please!! This is the best raceplay story on this site!
Ruffcub
8/4/19, 9:41 PM
Inspired by Dr Who? Cool story bro!
Anonymous
8/4/19, 9:05 PM
Ha! Awesome concept bro!
Anonymous
8/4/19, 7:25 PM
Hopefully there will be some father and son play time.
Anonymous
8/4/19, 6:36 PM
Love your work! Wish there was more sex, but your plot development is wonderful.
Anonymous
8/4/19, 5:38 PM
I always look forward to reading your stories, and this is quickly becoming one of my favourites.
Anonymous
8/4/19, 3:46 PM
I cant wait for part 2
Anonymous
8/4/19, 3:32 PM
Excellent work
Spandexlad
8/4/19, 3:10 PM
That's fine. I didn't really know what the third tag should be since not a lot of stuff happens in this chapter. It's mostly to tie up loose ends in Part 1 and introduce Part 2.