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12/19/24, 11:48 PM
it was hard to follow in places

12/20/24, 4:50 PM
@[BigMetalHusband](/user/show/10003859) Thank you for letting me know about this. Can you please be more specific so I may try to fix it?
12/20/24, 3:55 PM
Such a great addition, Jack! I’m very excited to find out what happens next to Buck… AND his dad!
Tanner
12/20/24, 3:13 PM
I wonder where little Billy goes from here. Poor guy. His wife won’t be pleased. He might be better off without his bush so everyone could see his tiny penis in all its glory.
12/20/24, 2:33 PM
i love when his hot breath was close to his face... omgosh...i love your writing. Where can i read more and more of your stories.?
Tanner
12/20/24, 2:25 PM
So good!!!
12/20/24, 2:03 PM
WOW! That was just so exciting. The green eyes... the references to the smells of men... the blonde hair providing influence on the boy... WHAT A GREAT STORY. Thank you
Dec 20, 2024
12/20/24, 9:02 AM
Hot, love the writing.

Pcm
12/20/24, 10:24 AM
@Flamefox23 Thank you!
5/21/23, 9:52 PM
The concept's good, and the writing's good. It feels a bit rushed though. I hope we see more from you, and I hope it's a bit more drawn out. Just so you can really get into the groove of these changes.

Majin Charles
5/21/23, 10:18 PM
@[Lancelot](/user/show/127419) really appreciate the criticism, i definitely agree in hindsight! there's a lot more i could've (and should've) gotten into... there's always next time, i suppose. shall definitely be posting more, thanks!

12/20/24, 8:26 AM
@Majin Charles Well, I swooped back around. Still love the concept and the writing. Kinda sad to see nothing more ever cropped up here from you. Really hoping that someday changes. Or you mention if you're posting somewhere else.
12/20/24, 4:17 AM
A bittersweet ending. Coal is defeated , but Grey is going back with him to their planet. I hope there was a way for the two of them being together. Oh well
Dec 20, 2024
12/20/24, 2:53 AM
Its frickin bats! I love halloween :)

Pcm
12/20/24, 3:46 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) Im a month and a half too late for halloween, it seemes. Well, at this rate, both of the boys will become real bats soon enough.

12/20/24, 3:55 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Haha, no worries! Love this quote and thought it was appropriate. Great story!

Pcm
12/20/24, 4:13 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) Thank you!