Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/18/19, 8:33 AM
victorian prudes? the original poster nananadangerous posted this story on deviantart where this is from and his account is full edited pictures underage people. this original story has been edited to AGE UP the already young characters! it should be removed
Anonymous
5/18/19, 8:24 AM
love it! can't wait for the next chapter!
5/18/19, 8:10 AM
i do do my best to catch spelling errors but some still slip through.
transformheaven
5/18/19, 7:25 AM
Hot story! Try to read over it before you post ot though, biiig spelling mistakes sometimes. But still hot ;)
transformheaven
5/18/19, 6:02 AM
Thanks for your comment Hypnothrill! Glad to hear you like it! I do notice that I'm still struggling to find "the sweet spot" with the pacing. As you maybe noticed this is one of my longer stories because I wanted to pace it a bit slower then usual. But I still need to find the balance where you don't explain too much or go too slow. But well, hope to improve that ;) Anyway, thanks for the feedback! :)
Lustystallion
5/18/19, 5:53 AM
loved it. what a great series
5/18/19, 5:23 AM
I love the way he gets ensnared, and I'm very excited to see what happens next.
Anonymous
5/18/19, 3:04 AM
It's a transformation story.
5/18/19, 2:38 AM
This is such a hot series, and the ideas here are awesome. But IMO the pacing is a little too frantic; I loved reading about Tyler's mental and physical transformations, but I wish they'd happened a bit more slowly.
Vivid
5/18/19, 1:56 AM
I think it was more like 'implied' mind control since the prince took a sudden liking to the princess he never met before. But I still agree with you UchihaDEMS that there isn't any of the usual mind control we see on this sight. I still think this was an interesting story though.