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5/5/19, 1:15 AM
Another amazing entry from the mighty Hypnothrill! Reminds me of DC Comics' Starro the Conqueror
5/5/19, 12:52 AM
This. Was. Phenomenal. There is nothing like a slow burn narrative; it gives the reader time to grasp both the cognitive and visceral responses involved in a mind-control scenario, and you handled it masterfully. I'm adding my voice to what I'm guessing will be an increasing number of readers requesting a sequel.
M
5/4/19, 11:58 PM
FUCKING HOT STORY! I love it plus with the lyrics it made it even better. It would be awesome if there's a sequel.
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5/4/19, 11:05 PM
I do love the emphasis on romance rather than just full on lust and sex for this one! I mean I still enjoy it, but it's fun to have something simple and cute between hypnotized guys~! Nice work!
Anonymous
5/4/19, 10:36 PM
very well written and enjoyable. Pity the last link is not
5/4/19, 10:24 PM
thanks @absman420, i had a lot of fun writing those lyrics. i had the idea of a sexy band for a long time but i didn't dare write the lyrics i felt the story needed because i'm not a native speaker and didn't have the abilities. glad i finally gave it a shot. it was surprisingly not that difficult.
5/4/19, 9:51 PM
It was great fun! A nice, slow burn through a range of emotions (and positions). And of course, I totally love of a non-linear narrative! Well done! Now -- this is totally true -- IRL, I'm a lyricist. I've written music & lyrics for 15 produced shows, including a national tour and a show in the Edinburgh Fringe Festival a few years ago (my personal pride). Granted, I'm more of the Sondheim school, but that only makes me a special kind of theatre snob -- the gay kind. (Note the pretentious spelling of the word "theatre".) With all that in mind, I think your lyrics worked great! I appreciate the effort you went through to do them and do them so well. They added a subtext to this story that is generally missing from this type of mind-control romp. It's what will continue to set this story apart in the years to come. Me like.
Anonymous
5/4/19, 8:43 PM
the artist who painted the actual painting is Ali Franco, @alifranco_art on Instagram. His stuff is great
Hot Wanker
5/4/19, 8:24 PM
Damn, this story is hot! Can't wait to read the next installment!
5/4/19, 8:16 PM
> really enjoyed the treatment those two gave Refractor Kid. > @abradacacabra923 Thank you! The greatest challenge with a multi-part transformation series is keeping the transformations original and fresh. As I've said many times, to me there's nothing worse than "Chapter 6: the same thing happens to someone else". (That's why I usually cut away just as the transformation is about to happen -- I figure that will almost force the reader to imagine it, which is what I want, and save me from writing the same moment over and over.) So here we are in a world where every character has a unique super-power. So the fun becomes "how can I exploit that super-power in the transformation scene?" I feel like I've been pretty good so far, but even I enjoyed describing what a dick would look like fucking an invisible hole... The other interesting bit is figuring out who's a top and who's a bottom. Heeheehee.... we all have our bets.