Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/28/19, 6:40 PM
What I mean is that Richie is such a douche bag. He made Devin so and yet not take responsibility. His actions has no purpose except messing others up. I guess people here expect positive praises only so they feel butt hurt when it's not?
Anonymous
4/28/19, 6:33 PM
I love it, I want more
4/28/19, 6:24 PM
I'm glad you are enjoying it. Hopefully I can get some more time to speed it up. The good news is that there is plenty more to come - there is life after Brendan.
orrinotica
4/28/19, 5:20 PM
Yea i dunno. theres one or two people that love commenting negative stuff on my stories with little or no feedback.
4/28/19, 5:14 PM
The point?
Apr 28, 2019
Anonymous
4/28/19, 5:08 PM
I give you credit for having the story in your head and writing as you perfected in your head. What's obvious is that you also edited before you posted. It was a polished piece of writing that you should be very proud of. I loved reading it. Hot story! Hot concept!
Anonymous
4/28/19, 3:35 PM
i do agree with all the comments... humillation, foot fetish, exposing, control over the platoon. etc... please keep it coming!
Don't be a snowflake
4/28/19, 3:26 PM
there are all kinds of fucked up shit here and raceplay triggers some people? so be it then. author, keep making more stories like this please.
Apr 28, 2019
Anonymous
4/28/19, 2:57 PM
Excellent work Thanks
SirD
4/28/19, 2:45 PM
loved that chapter!!!!