Recent Comments

Mar 29, 2019
Stephen
4/23/19, 10:17 PM
Wow my friend, this is a wonderfully written story. You did a wonderful job with character development, and details. My hat off to you! Thanks
Apr 22, 2019
4/23/19, 9:37 PM
A writing teacher once told me to "start as deep into the action as possible" and I've always found that good advice (that's coming from ME, the KING of exposition!). This story does that perfectly. It doesn't matter what the dad was infected with, just that he was, which underscored the protagonist's confusion and fear. I really liked it, short tho it be. A good exercise. Well done!
Martin
4/23/19, 9:26 PM
@abracadabra923, exactly what kind of stories do you think are not suitable for this site? Chastity and other - even extreme - kinks are absolutely fine. As long as there's some mind-control theme in the story as well.
4/23/19, 9:11 PM
I like these stories with happy endings.
Anonymous
4/23/19, 8:41 PM
Curious to see where things go from here! Are there still any heroes left to try and stop the harem from growing? Any plans on bringing Superboy(Conner) into the story? I could see him and Tim trying to figure out what's going on before falling into a trap. maybe Nightwing is 'helping' them but is really just bringing them closer to be mind controlled for their new master? either way looking forward to what you have planned for our heroes!
Anonymous
4/23/19, 7:58 PM
man, you've always been my favourite tf writer, and this chapter just reinforced it. the part where Raul thought he'd transformed Carlos was amazing. I really thought Raul lost it and I was crushed for Chad. Glad it was just Raul's imagination. Can't wait for the next part!
Anonymous
4/23/19, 7:30 PM
I feel like the shoe is going to drop with between Ji, Mason, and the mad genius soon since Jacob is keeping so many secrets. I like Ji's inclusion btw so I love the chapters he shows up
Anonymous
4/23/19, 7:02 PM
Embarrassing immaturity <3
4/23/19, 6:17 PM
@ken sorry but Westin is basically just a nod to the chastity theme i've got going on in a lot of my stories, which aren't suitable for this site. my stuff on Nifty is usually a lot less tame than this one. (mail me if you want links with descriptions)
Anonymous
4/23/19, 6:03 PM
Why not this. His control goes beyond that he began traveling to various timelines have their parallel selves meet. Maybe that will have more self cest... but that would make the story too long and overly complicate things