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11/12/25, 5:36 PM
OOO this chapter is very gripping! I enjoy the way it was all paced out! Will read the rest!
11/12/25, 4:57 PM
Ohhh, Nathan's father is the guy Zeke wanted to be! I expect MANY reveals later down the line. Also, yeah, we are starting to see MUCH more nefarious uses of Oby. that guy's husband being turned into a cuck and then taken away? :cry: Cole tho, that was deserved! But I think our Rookie underestimated the problem. Oh well, time to now invent Mpreg, I suppose.... Tho, the cast is starting to get bloated, no?
11/12/25, 3:06 PM
Will there be more

11/12/25, 4:53 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) yup!
11/12/25, 4:33 PM
A great beginning! Very hot throughout.

11/12/25, 4:42 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Thank you. Enjoy your works too. Part two just sent to them for review.
Anonymous
11/12/25, 12:55 PM
Is the next chapter comming soon?
11/12/25, 8:47 AM
Man, what an ending. It's been a great journey. Following the story from the begining until now, I gotta say you nailed the ending. Mastermind is an amazing magician, their misdirections being forshadowed but still easily overlooked, it’s awesome. This is probably one of my favorite stories I've read not just on this site, but online in general. And I can't wait until the day we meet Mastermind and the Lost Boys again.... after they enjoy their "retirement" of course. So, until the next chapter!
Anonymous
11/12/25, 6:25 AM
Now it is clearer that no matter how stupid the story is, it should always have a logical narrative (this is my personal opinion) and understanding, so that it is interesting to read.

11/12/25, 8:04 AM
@Anonymous I don't quite understand what you mean, Anon, but thanks for the feedback.
Anonymous
11/12/25, 7:11 AM
May I ask? Do you have plans of continuing this series? That was my favorite and I'm still waiting lol. It would be a shame if it ends without a real ending.
11/12/25, 6:31 AM
I don't really know what was behind this story, or really even the whole contents of the story. In truth I read so little of the very beginning of the story, my reaction likely has little to do with the way the story evolved. I'm glad this story apparently met SlaveTaylor's needs, but if the first few paragraphs reflect anything like what he really experienced I feel badly for him. After reading just a few paragraphs in this first chapter, and the synopsis of each of the chapters, I stopped reading. I thought this Kam character is such a sadistic, narcissistic asshole, I had had enough. I have enough trouble dealing with all the real narcissistic assholes currently trying so hard to drive this country back into an abhorrent, uncaring, misogynistic, racist, hateful pit of white supremacy and chaos without having them take over my fantasies.
11/12/25, 6:00 AM
I do generally enjoy stories of domination, control, and submission, but I have to say that becoming a drone to this extent and in this manner seems very similar to the process of dying and its conclusion death. One bright side perhaps is that it seems the drugs used here might be better than the morphine which is commonly used to keep a dying patient calm and control his pain. My reaction is likely partly my own somewhat 'down' mood, but at the moment the story kind of added to my 'downer'.