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11/12/25, 8:47 AM
Man, what an ending. It's been a great journey. Following the story from the begining until now, I gotta say you nailed the ending. Mastermind is an amazing magician, their misdirections being forshadowed but still easily overlooked, it’s awesome. This is probably one of my favorite stories I've read not just on this site, but online in general. And I can't wait until the day we meet Mastermind and the Lost Boys again.... after they enjoy their "retirement" of course. So, until the next chapter!
Anonymous
11/12/25, 6:25 AM
Now it is clearer that no matter how stupid the story is, it should always have a logical narrative (this is my personal opinion) and understanding, so that it is interesting to read.

11/12/25, 8:04 AM
@Anonymous I don't quite understand what you mean, Anon, but thanks for the feedback.
Anonymous
11/12/25, 7:11 AM
May I ask? Do you have plans of continuing this series? That was my favorite and I'm still waiting lol. It would be a shame if it ends without a real ending.
11/12/25, 6:31 AM
I don't really know what was behind this story, or really even the whole contents of the story. In truth I read so little of the very beginning of the story, my reaction likely has little to do with the way the story evolved. I'm glad this story apparently met SlaveTaylor's needs, but if the first few paragraphs reflect anything like what he really experienced I feel badly for him. After reading just a few paragraphs in this first chapter, and the synopsis of each of the chapters, I stopped reading. I thought this Kam character is such a sadistic, narcissistic asshole, I had had enough. I have enough trouble dealing with all the real narcissistic assholes currently trying so hard to drive this country back into an abhorrent, uncaring, misogynistic, racist, hateful pit of white supremacy and chaos without having them take over my fantasies.
11/12/25, 6:00 AM
I do generally enjoy stories of domination, control, and submission, but I have to say that becoming a drone to this extent and in this manner seems very similar to the process of dying and its conclusion death. One bright side perhaps is that it seems the drugs used here might be better than the morphine which is commonly used to keep a dying patient calm and control his pain. My reaction is likely partly my own somewhat 'down' mood, but at the moment the story kind of added to my 'downer'.
11/12/25, 5:32 AM
Debido al "Rimaton" anual esta vez no habrá ningún par de nalgas que sostengan los mensajes. Todas están ocupadas participando en el concurso de rimjob más grande el año. Pero no se preocupen, igual seguirá abierto el espacio para que puedan dejar sus mensajes. Y para no desanimar, cuando haya acabo el concurso cualquiera de esos traseros estará libre y abierto, para que escojan personalmente cuál quieren que sostenga sus mensajes.
11/12/25, 5:07 AM
Oh..is this the last chapter? if so then congratulations for finishing the series. Really happy for the Supervillain couple, honestly I was hoping there is more scenes for when Detective Ames turned into CC but still I enjoyed reading this chapter,and nice to see that Houseboy also got his own power,am pretty interested on last part when Mastermind plan to make more lost boys especially now that they have their husband by their side and how they gonna do it. That was an adventure,I really enjoyed reading this series,I will probably re-read the series again in the future,thanks you for writing this Morgana,Great Works. 👍
11/12/25, 4:31 AM
Wow that was extremely hot Would love to talk with you more on Twitter @King_Craftsman
11/12/25, 4:19 AM
Absolutely love this. Very hot story and I'd love to see a Part 2
11/11/25, 5:55 PM
If everything followed the logical chain, Jacob would have long ago escaped and warned his pack and the Cullens about this warlock, even communicating telepathically. And he escaped long ago. Paul has no chance of catching up with Jacob (if we follow the logical chain). But that's unlikely to happen here, since it will be impossible to brainwash other pack members or some of the Cullens later. Don't forget about Alice, who sees the future and most likely already knows about this warlock, since his actions change events, which leads to Alice having visions in such cases. I'd be interested to see how you would get out of this. Logically, the Warlock should quickly leave there for another state. Other wolves will follow him to catch and free Paul. Then he can set traps and increase the number of his slaves. But I think even if the pack loses several members, they will by then find a way to resist the warlock's control and find information about him.

11/12/25, 3:43 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Okay, buddy, you're looking for meaning in a dumb fetish story, are you okay? But I'll try to explain, since it's not entirely clear from the hints what exactly I meant. I juggled the events a bit, so Victoria's army's attack happened BEFORE the Cullens returned, meaning they weren't in this battle, everything fell on Sam's Pack. That is, Victoria didn't gather forces for long, and decided to go on the attack with a much weaker army than at the time of the events of "Eclipse" As I wrote in the first chapter, from Jacob's point of view, it was the pack that saved Bella, not the Cullens, who appeared only after the battle, and only to save Edward from the Volturi with Bella's help. Therefore, there is no Cullens in the story, only their mention. As for the pack, Paul's pursuit of Jake, and the wizard, everything will be fine. Don't run ahead of the train. There will be traps, chases, and illusions, and in the end, belly rubs for obedient boys.:wink: