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8/9/25, 8:37 PM
Great story, loved the POV from both Mike and Josh. Love more humiliation felt by Mike, that he’s forced to reporting back to Josh. Maybe students on campus notice his tented boner in his pants, his “boner boy” nickname sticks. Daily after his AM workout he sits in the last stall of the locker room, can’t help but to work the gloryhole, typically sucking off 12 guys, cum is breakfast of champions and loaded with protein before class or maybe getting caught checking out the cocks on guys in the gym shower, conflicted by this, but still straight mike. Keep up the outstanding and hot writing.
8/9/25, 7:39 PM
I liked your story and the slow build to conversion. I agree with the shaving his body to show his build. I also agree that more frat boys show be added; maybe with Mike's aid. I don't like the idea of caging as he has already been mentally caged. Since Mike started this study for the money maybe he is put to use for money - along with those he recruits. Lots of possibilities!
8/9/25, 6:04 PM
Well done on the pacing and the progressive buildup of Mike's conditioning. As to what more to do with him, I'd recommend: - nipple sensitivity. Put emphasis on the size of his pecs. - greater desire to show of his muscular body. ++highly++ encourage him to remove his body hair. Really helps highlight his build. But also make him want to pose and flex. - encourage Mike to get a dildo for anal and oral training on his own. Perhaps this could even cause Mike to get a plug to help keep his Master's cum inside. - maybe having his programming bleed out in other subtle ways. Maybe he starts taking notice of attractive guys around campus. Or maybe he alters his regular clothes for tight or revealing clothing? - Switch from being addressed as Sir to Master. - And lastly, if you want, applying chastity would be amazing to read about. This is more about the physical then mental in this case. Mike is mentally locked as is. He is bound to his master and can't cum without permission. Chastity in this case, restricts a physical factor to amplify a mental one. Without access to his, he will endeavor to get his Master's even more. Which aligns with his programming. He wants his Master's cock and cum, he doesn't need his. It reinforces his condition and position.
Jul 19, 2023
8/9/25, 5:42 PM
Something evil this way cums. (i hope!)
Anonymous
8/9/25, 5:36 PM
Well, nipple sensitivity training is a must I’d say, with how much Josh seems to take interest in Mike’s nips. Get Josh to train his pecs into a pair of worthy muscle tits, and his nips to be so sensitive that it’d be a torture to wear shirt with how they keep stimulating his nips just from rubbing against the fabric from everyday routine.
8/9/25, 5:29 PM
Very hot and can't wait for more.
Anonymous
8/9/25, 5:14 PM
Great story great setup , “hearing” the files adds a lot. I also have to confess that even though it’s not usually my thing, I kept getting excited for him to be put into chastity. I liked thinking about how Mike would have to rationalize it. Also I liked how Mike put his own twist on the commands when awake - like rationalizing the thong. Lastly agree it’d be hot if eventually one of his bros got hooked up too and Mike slowly helped with his indoctrination during the night
Willie Cici
8/9/25, 12:03 AM
This was great!! I loved the slow boil, the man worship, the steamy sex. I read it twice. I can't wait for the next installment.

8/9/25, 4:08 PM
@Willie Cici Really appreciate the feedback, especially from an author who has been writing great stuff for more than 10 years. I especially love your role-reversal stuff. I return to [Best Laid Plans](https://www.gaykinkystories.com/series/show/209316) over and over again.
8/9/25, 2:55 PM
Terrific!
8/9/25, 1:33 PM
Now that is a story worthy of a great author. I hope there are many more to come.