Recent Comments

3/29/19, 3:00 AM
I really liked this one. I thought the mirrors were a really creative transformation device, and I appreciated how you didn't include any physical transformations, so that the men just decided that their (fairly average) bodies were beautiful and sexy.
Anonymous
3/29/19, 2:45 AM
AMAZING - great first piece
Kevin
3/29/19, 2:01 AM
great story
LongtimeFan
3/29/19, 1:50 AM
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO HOT. Watching more and more guys get blissed out and pumped up in real time...plus I love how you play with the fourth wall, making readers into viewers. We SHOULD be shocked by the terrifying transformations, but instead we're turned on...amazing. Just amazing.
3/29/19, 1:43 AM
Lyrical and provocative. More, please, Sir...
Kevin
3/29/19, 1:41 AM
was a slow begining but great ending
Anonymous
3/29/19, 1:38 AM
good story
3/29/19, 1:21 AM
I agree with Derek; the story would've been better served if more time was taken to clearly dilineate each character. Food for thought for the next chapter...and I hope there will be one; it's got great promise.
nycboot
3/29/19, 1:20 AM
I like this ending a lot, although the style of the narrative is very different from the previous installments. Thanks for putting it up as an alternative ending!
Anonymous
3/29/19, 12:56 AM
nice to see you back bruv, t riffic