Recent Comments

3/28/19, 6:51 AM
off to a great start. At first, it seemed a bit too underdeveloped, but on a second pass, I got real aroused., really fast. Looking forward to seeing how much farther it can go.
Anonymous
3/28/19, 6:40 AM
Great story and great twist at the end
Nico
3/28/19, 6:12 AM
I'm with everyone else. in the end, holliday needs to be in control
3/28/19, 5:43 AM
mmm...getting hungry..... "..Please, sir...may I have some more?"
3/28/19, 5:29 AM
Absolutely brilliant! I could read these entries for hours on end, and drift off, having them permeate my dreams . There is so much more to come, if you would....
Anonymous
3/28/19, 5:06 AM
pleeeease do more
3/28/19, 3:51 AM
Great story. Fantastic transformation, esp the voidless of taste corn becoming the voidless Kyle mind. And very well written. It was a joy to read. Now time for some popcorn...I'm hoping.
Kevin
3/28/19, 3:42 AM
great story
Arachnus The Spider
3/28/19, 2:42 AM
I thought I was being pretty equitable between the two men. *shrug* I welcome the criticism, but as for bad writing, you would need to be more specific. Otherwise it's impossible to address. I did go ahead and threw the end digression out because I sensed that might have to do with it. It was self-indulgent, I know. But all of this is. Update should reflect the change soon.
3/28/19, 2:37 AM
Wondering if you can also continue The Jock, The Nerd and The Wizard