Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/28/19, 5:06 AM
pleeeease do more
3/28/19, 3:51 AM
Great story. Fantastic transformation, esp the voidless of taste corn becoming the voidless Kyle mind. And very well written. It was a joy to read. Now time for some popcorn...I'm hoping.
Kevin
3/28/19, 3:42 AM
great story
Arachnus The Spider
3/28/19, 2:42 AM
I thought I was being pretty equitable between the two men. *shrug* I welcome the criticism, but as for bad writing, you would need to be more specific. Otherwise it's impossible to address. I did go ahead and threw the end digression out because I sensed that might have to do with it. It was self-indulgent, I know. But all of this is. Update should reflect the change soon.
3/28/19, 2:37 AM
Wondering if you can also continue The Jock, The Nerd and The Wizard
Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:19 AM
won't lie, I'd be Brody
Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:15 AM
I'd probably be a Darius or the Third option. But anyway, The sudden change of focus was a bit jarring. The start was completely transitioned well but then it was lost at the time Brody became the focus. It's a minor thing. But bad writing is a turn off for me... Which thankfully isn't common in this site.
M
3/28/19, 1:01 AM
So fucking hot!!! I loved the story and the twist at the end. I agree with everybody about the story having a part 2. I missed you here too. I always have been fan of your stories.
Anonymous
3/28/19, 12:36 AM
Nothing like a good alien infestation. And, using the baseball team thoroughly enhanced for me.
Anonymous
3/27/19, 11:32 PM
yes more!