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11/12/25, 4:19 AM
Absolutely love this. Very hot story and I'd love to see a Part 2
11/11/25, 5:55 PM
If everything followed the logical chain, Jacob would have long ago escaped and warned his pack and the Cullens about this warlock, even communicating telepathically. And he escaped long ago. Paul has no chance of catching up with Jacob (if we follow the logical chain). But that's unlikely to happen here, since it will be impossible to brainwash other pack members or some of the Cullens later. Don't forget about Alice, who sees the future and most likely already knows about this warlock, since his actions change events, which leads to Alice having visions in such cases. I'd be interested to see how you would get out of this. Logically, the Warlock should quickly leave there for another state. Other wolves will follow him to catch and free Paul. Then he can set traps and increase the number of his slaves. But I think even if the pack loses several members, they will by then find a way to resist the warlock's control and find information about him.

11/12/25, 3:43 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Okay, buddy, you're looking for meaning in a dumb fetish story, are you okay? But I'll try to explain, since it's not entirely clear from the hints what exactly I meant. I juggled the events a bit, so Victoria's army's attack happened BEFORE the Cullens returned, meaning they weren't in this battle, everything fell on Sam's Pack. That is, Victoria didn't gather forces for long, and decided to go on the attack with a much weaker army than at the time of the events of "Eclipse" As I wrote in the first chapter, from Jacob's point of view, it was the pack that saved Bella, not the Cullens, who appeared only after the battle, and only to save Edward from the Volturi with Bella's help. Therefore, there is no Cullens in the story, only their mention. As for the pack, Paul's pursuit of Jake, and the wizard, everything will be fine. Don't run ahead of the train. There will be traps, chases, and illusions, and in the end, belly rubs for obedient boys.:wink:
11/11/25, 12:59 AM
At least I got a few very good comments. Thanks. I’m doing my best, I spend a lot of energy on these stories, they’re tightly structured. I try to give interesting details to make things alive and real. A few people appreciate them, that makes me happy.

Willie Cici
11/12/25, 1:25 AM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) You deserve many more. That was a great story.
11/11/25, 9:19 PM
Nice well written story. When does it become sexy?
Anonymous
11/11/25, 9:07 PM
Love it! Thats a really strong start, I wonder what happened 👀
11/11/25, 6:30 PM
Very hot! :fire: I liked how the hypnotist used twisted his words to put the blame in anyone but himself. The slow burn and constant induction was delicious. This man seems to be capable of making anyone think and do anything! If that's so, please, could you talk him into convincing bank owners to remove their ban against Mind Control in gay porn? :grin: I think it'd be for everyone's benefit. Thanks again for sharing your authorial voice with us. You're a source of inspiration.

11/11/25, 6:35 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thanks for your comment Piko. And yes, I’d love for financial entities to stop interfering with what we want to purchase. It was already hard to find good mc material, now nobody wants to make it anymore because of them.
11/11/25, 6:35 PM
Many things to like here! How oblivious these men are, the way they chanted together, the changes they did in their pursue to their best friend's approval, and the short reminiscence of the most erotic and intimate moments Taylor had during his slow conditioning :heart:
11/10/25, 5:58 PM
It seems pretty obvious at this point that the only guy to deflower our protagonist is going to be his Daddy. I guess it’s just a waiting game to see how long that takes to play out…

Anonymous
11/11/25, 5:45 PM
I hope this ends with his dad seducing Leo and just as Leo is about to give up his virginity to his dad, his grandad comes in and cucks his dad.
11/11/25, 5:17 PM
I’ve enjoyed your stuff from long go. MCstories has stuff from the 90s on it. 25 years of hot stories. Makes me wish you did discord.
11/11/25, 4:53 PM
So perfect, the way you write Gabriel's mind being rewrite, and the exploration of Sam and Kyle's lives and goals is so GREAT!!!!:heart_eyes: Also, that is some very creative stuff! Congrats on Kyle for managing to not being completely whammied, and those are some VERY creative situations you made!!!