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LongtimeFan
3/31/19, 8:11 AM
I love this series!...but I have to agree with Hypnothrill on this one. It's explicitly stated that Jim's dad has NOT been to the diner, so all of his actions were of his own free will. Take away the hypnosis/mind control, and you're left with something that feels emotionally and mentally abusive (especially because you do an awesome job at writing Jim as a lost, frightened kid). As Hypnodominion said, it might be a set-up, but in general, seeing Jim forced into his transformation by someone who WASN'T magically/hypnotically influenced feels cruel. I'll keep reading, though--love seeing what comes next!
Anonymous
3/31/19, 6:22 AM
awesome as always! pleas write more
Onodera
3/31/19, 5:56 AM
Really hot the story! I loved all the story so far of Lt. Mustang had so far! He is the perfect alpha soldier! Made completely for combat and cum! Man, the idea is very hot!! I wonder what will happen to him from now on! Please, continue this series!
nerdysuitedbaby
3/31/19, 5:41 AM
Loved this chapter kind of cute and sweet to see him so vulnerable. Poor kid! I hope Jim isn't completely gone I mean he's preppy without the complete mood control so love to see how this goes. Maybe he'll run into his friends and try to reconnect. Will he be happy to be reunited or will this drive him to fight? Interesting take. Also curious about the first time they had to transform someone so fast. As Grizz was the second could be a chapter or a spin off story. Also love to see you write other prep stories on top of this series. If you'd like to exchange ideas or chat feel free to email me at suited.baby.venom@gmail.com
Onodera
3/31/19, 5:35 AM
Very hot and AMAZING story, man! I loved how you wrote about capturing big alpha male soldier to be bound and milked endless! This is very hot!! I going definitely read the other ones!!
Anonymous
3/31/19, 3:54 AM
like cycle+clone!! we'll see the fate of these awesome characters very soon. amazing as always!!
Anonymous
3/31/19, 2:23 AM
I love this! Please make more
Anonymous
3/31/19, 1:15 AM
there's gotta be more of this kind of non-surgical ball-removal. i don't know why it's so hot to me to have them just sort of transform away in some form or another (but surgical removal is a complete turn-off)
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3/30/19, 11:33 PM
Interesting start, but no follow up.
Anonymous
3/30/19, 10:16 PM
I was really hoping Jim would willingly become James, but this was good. I hope there will be a group reunion, or maybe James will find a way to properly thank his dad.