Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/25/19, 7:00 AM
wow this was awesome!
2/25/19, 6:44 AM
Joining the choir here: This is excellent. The narrator's humorous tone is wonderful and the flow is very, very good.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
2/25/19, 6:18 AM
It's true. Being dumb is great. Being dumb is also a turn on! So is having a man piss directly down your throat then sucking him off! Damned hot!
OwnerLordandMaster
2/25/19, 5:36 AM
Taking your word that this might well be the first chapter of your very first story, you are, already, my favorite author.... at this time. Bring on chapter 2!
2/25/19, 5:24 AM
As others have said, extremely well written. Very much looking forward to where you go from here.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:52 AM
Soooo hot already!! Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:24 AM
It's great to see such a talented new writer here! The characterization was so sincere and vivid, I can't wait to see where you take this.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:14 AM
amazing story. cannot wait to read the next chapter
leedsdevil
2/25/19, 2:02 AM
Excellent beginning of the story and so well written, as has been noted already. Thank you. I look forward to this story and more!
2/25/19, 1:57 AM
Well done - an excellent start - looking forward to part 2...