Recent Comments

Feb 18, 2019
Anonymous
2/19/19, 6:15 AM
great story, could've done with a bit more of a description of the items. looking forward to the next part...
Anonymous
2/19/19, 5:05 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Feb 18, 2019
Anonymous
2/19/19, 5:04 AM
Loved this story. I can picture it. Interesting twist at the end.
tiny tim
2/19/19, 1:52 AM
Couldn't the men at Daltons use a good 'Sissy' among all those rough skinhead's ??? It would have been interesting if one of those black-dudes was changed into a fem. black sissy slut !!!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/19/19, 12:56 AM
Demomtar, I understand that some of the feedback here may seem harsh but I hope you take it in the spirit which (i believe) most offered it: constructive criticism. As others have said, you have what could be a good story but it needs some work on the mechanics (spelling and grammar… but also pacing and structure). Please don't give up.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/19/19, 12:20 AM
I think this was a bit of Disproportionate Retribution to me
Anonymous
2/18/19, 11:58 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
2/18/19, 11:12 PM
This is amazing, carry on man...
Kyle
2/18/19, 11:10 PM
That is one hell of a dream memory. Damn!
Kyle
2/18/19, 10:56 PM
This series is fantastic. I can't wait to finish it and yet, at the same time, don't want to finish too fast. The age old problem, eh? Great writing! Thanks for the hot story chapters!