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Nov 7, 2025
11/8/25, 8:05 AM
Jealous.

11/9/25, 10:15 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Of Bart or Dave 😏

11/12/25, 8:26 PM
@[Smiley](/user/show/1337187) Both? But more Bart. 🫣
HairyBear
11/12/25, 7:39 PM
Oh please oh please continue this series! I love it so much ... perfect wanking material - at least it gets the job done for me every time ;)O
11/12/25, 5:36 PM
OOO this chapter is very gripping! I enjoy the way it was all paced out! Will read the rest!
11/12/25, 4:57 PM
Ohhh, Nathan's father is the guy Zeke wanted to be! I expect MANY reveals later down the line. Also, yeah, we are starting to see MUCH more nefarious uses of Oby. that guy's husband being turned into a cuck and then taken away? :cry: Cole tho, that was deserved! But I think our Rookie underestimated the problem. Oh well, time to now invent Mpreg, I suppose.... Tho, the cast is starting to get bloated, no?
11/12/25, 3:06 PM
Will there be more

11/12/25, 4:53 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) yup!
11/12/25, 4:33 PM
A great beginning! Very hot throughout.

11/12/25, 4:42 PM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Thank you. Enjoy your works too. Part two just sent to them for review.
Anonymous
11/12/25, 12:55 PM
Is the next chapter comming soon?
11/12/25, 8:47 AM
Man, what an ending. It's been a great journey. Following the story from the begining until now, I gotta say you nailed the ending. Mastermind is an amazing magician, their misdirections being forshadowed but still easily overlooked, it’s awesome. This is probably one of my favorite stories I've read not just on this site, but online in general. And I can't wait until the day we meet Mastermind and the Lost Boys again.... after they enjoy their "retirement" of course. So, until the next chapter!
Anonymous
11/12/25, 6:25 AM
Now it is clearer that no matter how stupid the story is, it should always have a logical narrative (this is my personal opinion) and understanding, so that it is interesting to read.

11/12/25, 8:04 AM
@Anonymous I don't quite understand what you mean, Anon, but thanks for the feedback.
Anonymous
11/12/25, 7:11 AM
May I ask? Do you have plans of continuing this series? That was my favorite and I'm still waiting lol. It would be a shame if it ends without a real ending.