Recent Comments

Mdlftr
1/19/19, 5:34 PM
Good writing, as usual from you! The details, such as men leaving the meat sauce on their faces while chowing down on plates of ribs, were compelling. I'd love to read more detailed descriptions about the changes to the servers - maybe a description of their growing pecs pushing up against the t-shirts? I loved the father's comments "that can't be sanitary" - about the exposed pit hair. Can't wait to see what else is going to swell up and pop out! lol
Mdlftr
1/19/19, 5:19 PM
Good description of the growing mind control. Even though the narrator tried to avoid being drawn in, the "beef stew" from lunch seems like it was spiked to set him up to "be ready" for the programming. Also, did the transformed guys get "a REALLY BIG DICK and a FUCKING HOT BUTT"? The story needs more detailed descriptions of the post-transformation guys!
Anonymous
1/19/19, 5:12 PM
The idea is hot but it needs more detail, more breathing room. I especially wish there was more detail in the transformations. But I love that these "straight" men are too himboed out to see they're 100% gaybros.
Anonymous
1/19/19, 4:28 PM
This is amazing! When is the next chapter coming out?
nudistwanker
1/19/19, 2:12 PM
Another great story that got me hard as I read it.
Anonymous
1/19/19, 3:26 AM
Subject matter is interesting, but couldn't go through the jumbled mess of sentences and name changing constantly. A little bit of editing will go a long way to make this readable.
Anonymous
1/19/19, 2:45 AM
I hope to read more of this series..... Good work!!!
Ringer
1/18/19, 10:54 PM
I can't wait for the next part : D
rubaluva
1/18/19, 10:47 PM
Brillant! This really needs a Part 2... and 3... and...
transformheaven
1/18/19, 9:41 PM
@ForgottenCradle, I hope to continue this anytime soon, pretty busy tho so might take some time. Thanks for your comment tho!