Recent Comments

TimNJ
12/28/18, 7:51 AM
Awesome finale. I LOVE this series so much I hate seeing it end! I cum every time I read it.
ForgottenCradle
12/28/18, 7:49 AM
I second that Superman thing
Max
12/28/18, 7:49 AM
Definetly continue
Anonymous
12/28/18, 7:16 AM
I’d love to see more from you. Very well written!
Anonymous
12/28/18, 6:35 AM
Great writing. Please continue
Anonymous
12/28/18, 5:54 AM
i looove this series!
Anonymous
12/28/18, 5:15 AM
I'm hard. Damn!!!
12/28/18, 3:47 AM
Hmmm I think you forgot to specify exactly how big the narrator's dick got after being sucked on a couple times. It went from +1" to "huge". I also got the impression it got thicker, but you didn't detail that.
rubaluva
12/28/18, 2:18 AM
Unfortunately it was pretty heavy reading as there was only 2 paragraphs and no new lines for speech etc. Perhaps if you write a new chapter you could try doing that, which would make it a more enjoyable read.
Anonymous
12/28/18, 1:47 AM
Great series! I'd also love more details about the transformation process itself and/or a narration from the main characters perspective? More detailed descriptions of surroundings, actions and looks might give it more depth and might make it easier to find content for sequels. The more you go into detail the more variation you might be able to find. Thanks for you work.