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Anonymous
11/22/24, 2:55 PM
This is a really small and picky thing, but 40kHz is way beyond the range of healthy human hearing, which caps at 20kHz, and may well be lower for an adult, especially if he's been exposed to loud sound through headphones/earbuds/concerts/jobs like so many of us have. 40kHz is definitionally ultrasound (not perceptible by humans). Also, 5Hz of change in frequency is not going to produce a perceptible difference in sound if you're already measuring a sound in kHz. Anyway, hot story and I'm looking forward to reading ch2 later :)
11/22/24, 1:30 PM
Very enjoyable start

11/22/24, 2:11 PM
@[OrangeBear](/user/show/10002019) Thank you, Orange Bear
Nov 22, 2024
11/22/24, 2:01 PM
Very hot story! And welcome back to writing! XD
Anonymous
11/22/24, 1:58 PM
God this was so hot, so excited to read more!
11/22/24, 12:48 PM
I loved this. I want to read more.
11/22/24, 12:34 PM
I read this all in one go and it was fantastic! I like the buildup to the double fuck. The manipulation and diversionary tactics like shoving his face in a pit; so hot and deliciously evil! Fabulous Double Daddy seduction/induction!
Lampshade15
11/22/24, 12:13 PM
Oh my god, this is so incredibly hot. Pushed all my buttons!
11/22/24, 9:19 AM
Loved this one!
11/20/24, 6:30 PM
Good start! Love the overdrawn main character. Lots of potential here for dumb jocks getting off in...unfortunate circumstances!

11/22/24, 7:48 AM
@[dumbjockhunter](/user/show/10025609) Thanks! And yeah... my goal in writing this is to build on that trope but with a "realistic" tilt, although still unconstrained by reality, if that makes sense. Glad you liked the PoV character as he's a bit controversial :D
11/22/24, 7:46 AM
Loved this! Super fun world you've built up, and even more fun when these guys use their powers to publicly humiliate others. It's everything up my alley personally and I would love to see more if you have the ideas for it whether it continues with these two or others at the school