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rubaluva
12/21/18, 11:24 AM
Fine story, but I feel really sorry for Dare. He was totally innocent and was dragged into this.
Anonymous
12/21/18, 11:24 AM
Thank you, LOL I felt the grammar was super off. Also any ideas for the next chapter, I already have some but i would like to hear from the audience.
Liam
12/21/18, 11:20 AM
Damn man, hot as hell. Really look forward to the next parts!
Bulk
12/21/18, 11:09 AM
Maybe someone like https://www.instagram.com/fabrissou/ ?
Dec 19, 2018
feelinpeachy
12/21/18, 10:41 AM
new fave! glad to see you keep at it after tumblr's implosion
12/21/18, 10:13 AM
Thanks! I am _also_ very interested in trying to make that happen. Unfortunately while I do have some artistic talent, none of that manifests in drawing humanoid creatures. xD. And I don't know anyone who does character design commissions.
Anonymous
12/21/18, 8:54 AM
YAAAAAAASSSSS!!!!!
Bulk
12/21/18, 8:28 AM
This was fantastic, I'd love to see some of these scenes drawn by a real comic artist.
Anonymous
12/21/18, 7:57 AM
The concept is hot and I'm curious about the next parts, but please try to improve a bit the grammar. Write shorter sentences, use more punctuation. I know it's your first attempt, but It's almost unreadable as it is right now.
Anonymous
12/21/18, 7:39 AM
Also to add I love the little voyueristic and controlling touches you weave in. Like the little bit at the end where Bruce and John are sleep 69ing. It would be so easer for our good Mr. Peterson to have them fawn over him but to have them both manipulated into their interactions with each other is just so much more enticing to me.