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11/11/25, 2:46 AM
This one did it for me. The Alpha face off is great. Secretly rooting for boyfriend-ship here. Nice job
11/11/25, 2:45 AM
Loved this - I always get hard for a man of authority like Ted going under. Also the slow burn of mind control on Miles was hot. Great job
11/11/25, 2:39 AM
The cock tongue and nullification are two fun and undervalued kinks. I also appreciate the kindness and validation you give your main characters.
11/11/25, 2:33 AM
Very hot! Can't wait to read more. Maybe their humiliation becomes more public? 🫠
Anonymous
11/11/25, 1:51 AM
YES! I have to agree. VERY HOT sorry indeed. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
11/11/25, 1:49 AM
Instant favorite, a real treat - thanks!
11/11/25, 1:23 AM
The story is excellent, as always. But honestly, there are many stories like this, and we know how it all ends because the plot gets tiresome and becomes obvious. While I understand that this is an erotic story, it's strange that the police officer wasn't suspicious of the doctor's treatment methods. In his place, he could have secretly learned information from other therapists about his treatment methods, learned more about the doctor's biography, and secretly placed a bug on himself (which would record the session with the doctor) to find out what happens to him during "therapy" when he's unconscious. I understand that if everything had gone according to the scenarios I wrote, it would have been difficult, if not impossible, for the officer to fall. But I would have liked to see an unexpected development and a realistic protagonist (I wish there were many more like them in similar stories), with characters who behaved like real people. I think such moments would have made the story much more dynamic and interesting in terms of plot, as there are various erotic stories that focus on logical chains of events and cause-and-effect relationships. This isn't criticism (it's just my subjective opinion), and I hope I haven't offended you or anyone else. You're a wonderful writer with a wealth of experience, and you even have stories with interesting plots.

Anonymous
11/11/25, 1:46 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) An opinion that is reasonably expressed is never offensive. However, I’m not writing literature. I’m just writing a jerk-off story. Nothing in these stories are realistic lol. If I was writing legitimate fiction, of course what you suggest would probably be in it. But then, as you also reasonably pointed out, where would be the story? Thank you for the compliment about being a wonderful writer. I also guess you meant it as a compliment when you said β€œyou even have stories etec.” That said, I leave my legitimate writing with interesting plots and realistic situations for any non-porn fiction I write.
pmk
11/11/25, 1:03 AM
Absolutely loved this hot and well-written story! I'm happy to see you writing again.
11/10/25, 8:28 PM
What a fun and hot story. Slow burn hypnosis at its best!
11/10/25, 7:11 PM
Love this series, very much looking forward to more. The runes open up the potential of all sorts of mischievous magic. But what's going to happen the next time Ryan needs to pee?