Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/28/18, 11:45 PM
LOVED IT!
11/28/18, 10:45 PM
Derek, bro, literally the story of the year. It needs sequels on sequels. Love the transformation.
Anonymous
11/28/18, 10:04 PM
More musclemen,please!
11/28/18, 9:01 PM
Totally understand not covering Tucker's changes in this story, but definitely found myself curious about the evolution of Tucker and Blake's feelings about each other as the night went on. Kind of a single-night version of one of my favorites of your stories, "The Birthday Gift": https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/1172
Daniel
11/28/18, 8:55 PM
I really liked the detail in the hypnosis process, and corruption is always HOT I.J.S.
Daniel
11/28/18, 8:34 PM
Corruption , hypnosis, incest, straight to gay ? I always say if you're gonna do it, go all the way...righteous dude ! I.J.S.
Anonymous
11/28/18, 7:48 PM
Wow! Would love to read more!
11/28/18, 7:42 PM
Great start, and I love the Kafka homage!
Anonymous
11/28/18, 7:02 PM
Great story. Love to see his inhibition slowly melting away until he loved men ! Can almost imagine the evening that have after they left the bar ;)
nycboot
11/28/18, 6:59 PM
Hey M. Greene. Sorry I've not been able to provide more feedback previously - my computer died recently so I've not been able to read your story until yesterday. It's fabulous so far. I love the scene with the wax doll and the magic and watching Marc's gradual transformation into Antoine. The scene above that concludes chapter 9 is particularly wonderful and so arousing. Glad to see you're back! Bravo to all your work!