Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
11/8/18, 12:28 AM
Great chapter! I agree with the above reader--Jake was cocky and full of dumb "alpha" posturing, so I'm glad he got his. I also love the idea of the "family" as a group of unrelated sex fiends...fun stuff! You're doing so well. :)
Anonymous
11/7/18, 9:52 PM
can't wait for the next part
11/7/18, 9:07 PM
Sooooo hot Keep on writing
11/7/18, 9:00 PM
I certainly enjoyed the changes in the story, though I will admit that it felt a bit all over the place at times, though I suppose that could've been the purpose since it did become a moshpit. :3 Regardless, a fun read!
11/7/18, 8:37 PM
Looks like a reporter is on the chopping block next, I am eager to see how this continues, and I'm also glad to see Jake finally succumb. :D
Anonymous
11/7/18, 8:27 PM
quite so. I'll adjust that
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
11/7/18, 8:14 PM
can you continue this story? please?
MagnusTheGreat
11/7/18, 8:11 PM
loved it
MagnusTheGreat
11/7/18, 8:07 PM
would love to watch a movie with this theme
MagnusTheGreat
11/7/18, 8:03 PM
I would some more stories with this world