Recent Comments

screamingmoist
11/4/18, 2:51 AM
Thanks for the kind words everyone! Glad to hear people are enjoying it so far.
Kevin
11/4/18, 1:36 AM
Great story! Loved the twist at the end. I was rooting for Eddie all along and I got what I wanted, but the twist added a nice texture to the ending. Really exciting to read and the suspense had me constantly checking for the next installment. Very unique idea.
Anonymous
11/4/18, 1:22 AM
love this series. absolutely amazing. would love to read more about Mike's (now Derek's) spike - how big it is and what it looks like with Derek's tattoos. sounds like a much improved Mike ;-)
Anonymous
11/4/18, 12:51 AM
Love this story and looking forward to the next chapter...
transformheaven
11/4/18, 12:18 AM
A hot ending for a hot series thanks man!
11/3/18, 11:48 PM
Pretty dick move. Such a pretty dick move. Wonderful as always. :-)
Anonymous
11/3/18, 11:34 PM
A sexy story continued, but still in need of a good editor.
transformheaven
11/3/18, 10:18 PM
Thank you so much for your advice Martin! I tried editing it in so it'll hopefully look a bit better now :D
Martin
11/3/18, 10:06 PM
A *friendly* advice: Please use more paragraphs to make your story more readable. For example, if you have a conversation, you usually start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. And also, when describing something, each thought or scene should be a separate paragraph. Just makes it easier for the reader.
ForgottenCradle
11/3/18, 9:54 PM
Have to agree with Hypnothrill. amazing story. a little fast paced wanted to see the video the dads watched and maybe we can get the policemen someday?