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Anonymous
11/1/18, 6:48 PM
interesting :)
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
11/1/18, 6:20 PM
Am almost expecting him to pass out, exhausted & wake up in them. Love idea of somebody slipping me into their underwear when I'm sleeping.
ForgottenCradle
11/1/18, 4:11 PM
the spelling errors weren't that bad. I have to agree that I was confused when the narrators switched,but it was nothing too bad. all in all a good start for a story ...and this may be my ultimate fantasy I just found...
LongtimeFan
11/1/18, 7:40 AM
Phenomenal stuff! The transformations were uber-hot, but it's the characterization and writing that make this such a great tale. Love how you paint each character with such amazing details, and bring them to life (plus both monsters sound horrific). Thank you!
Marktree6
11/1/18, 6:25 AM
Always love your stories. It would be great if you wrote one about a guy transforming loads of random individuals. I was hoping Todd would start changing random guys from his street and work. But great story
Anonymous
11/1/18, 4:30 AM
when will part 2 be out?
11/1/18, 4:25 AM
[Spoiler Alert] Great scary story and transformations. I was hoping that David became the Alpha not Brad. Much more to come I hope.
Anonymous
11/1/18, 1:08 AM
The writing can be a little hard to follow at times, but I still love this word you've created. Lots of stories out there about characters being dominated and feminized, not enough about the characters becoming powerful and godly!
Marktree6
10/31/18, 11:38 PM
Loved the mix of thrill, spook & transformation!
Anonymous
10/31/18, 10:56 PM
What will happen to the other dads