Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/5/18, 7:50 PM
I like the story, but I think you should drop the journal framing device. The main character just ends up knowing way more than they should (like how Peter has to listen to this song the second they get up), especially if the brainwashed are forming their own closed-circle group.
Daniel
9/5/18, 5:49 PM
Really terrific , you should be as proud as Dr Benjamin Bommer I.J.SY
Anonymous
9/5/18, 5:20 PM
Please Continue
Daniel
9/5/18, 5:10 PM
V,ery creative, well written and sexy...ready for more I.J.S.
Anonymous
9/5/18, 5:07 PM
I'm loving it!
Daniel
9/5/18, 4:48 PM
Terrific start oooh that milking. scene! Love it when a big straight man struggles and gets taken good job dude I.J.S.
Daniel
9/5/18, 4:23 PM
What a breath of fresh air! Perfect for a NetFlix film. Such a lovely VERY happy ending...and the photo choices were fyyyyne I.J.S.
Anonymous
9/5/18, 4:22 PM
Hypnothrill's trademark part one tease. Cant wait for the next one
Cigarboycody
9/5/18, 4:18 PM
Another great start to another great story!! This is starting out like the Invasion of the Body Snatchers. The original one. Where your friends start acting strange and you don't know why. Please hurry and post the next chapter!!! Love your stories!!
Anonymous
9/5/18, 4:14 PM
This is great! Assimilation paranoia stories are the best.