Recent Comments

8/31/18, 6:06 AM
I think this story has some merit so please carry on with it. it was a bit confusing (I take it that English is not your first language) but I carried on reading and like how it ended up. as Hypnothrill said it would be good to see the Biotomes turn on their captors and turn the whole base into the same creatures
ForgottenCradle
8/31/18, 4:15 AM
So glad to see it back and continuing. This chapter was great
8/31/18, 3:18 AM
Wow, thanks Absman! I've had so many orgasms to the original "Bulldawg Maker," it means a lot to hear that you were turned on by my sequel. BTW, I've got an idea for an upcoming story that will be set in the Cycle One universe.
Anonymous
8/31/18, 3:04 AM
More wishes, reality change is hot!
8/31/18, 3:03 AM
The story felt a little short, and I would have loved to have seen more descriptions of how Sgt. Reynolds felt as he was mind controlled and transformed. But it's a great premise. I'd love a sequel where the Biotomes turn on their military masters and begin converting them as well.
tfmrph33@yahoo.com
8/31/18, 2:49 AM
Chapter 2 please!
Anonymous
8/30/18, 11:42 PM
Keep going. It’s a great concept.
absman420
8/30/18, 9:53 PM
I think you did a great job -- not everything needs to be detailed and explained. Sometimes the leaps over what we know create a great sense of suspense. Really well done. It had ME hard!!!
absman420
8/30/18, 9:51 PM
absman420 here! What a great story! I had no idea this was here. Thank you -- very flattering. You have caught the vibe of the original story beautifully. Well done.
Rubba
8/30/18, 8:53 PM
Barely understood a word of it towards the end which is a pity because it SEEMED hot...