Recent Comments

11/9/25, 3:26 PM
Really hard to read. It could use another spelling and grammar pass.
11/9/25, 2:41 PM
I like the story, especially this chapter, it's the best so far. The story has potential to develop. It's nice to see a powerful hero like Hal Jordan succumb to corruption and temptation more and more with each training session until he becomes the perfect slave who thinks only about that. I hope the story continues after Jordan's fall and his transformation into a bitch's sex toy. Hal can help corrupt the other heroes of the League, since there are many of them. I hope the events eventually lead to something large-scale, like crossovers like DC: Vampire or DC: Crisis on Infinite Earths, only all in a sexual context, where the situation will be saved when almost the entire League is corrupted by female superheroes who are immune to hypnosis. Maybe you'll surprise us by showing something of your own. But for now, I'm curious where everything will turn. Plus one point to you for making the chapters longer. Let the next ones be even longer so that it's interesting to read and there are better plot twists and character reactions. I hope the chapters will also be told from the perspectives of other characters, including the main villain. Your narrative pace is excellent, and I hope the slow decline and corruption continue in the other chapters.
11/9/25, 1:35 PM
Too bad this fantasy. I could be transformed. It would be hot, especially with it happening without any worries.
8/12/25, 9:12 AM
So, how far (and deep...) will Jay go with his newfound pussybro? Will he share?

11/1/25, 6:05 PM
@[Xmale06](/user/show/10053174) I really don't think he'd have a choice. Caleb NEEDS it, like REAL bad. His ass has a mind of its own. It controls him. Can you imagine him in the locker room wiggling his ass at all the cocks flopping around. He's an ass wiggle away from the first of many gang bangs and of becoming the team's free use slut.

11/9/25, 12:45 PM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) God yes I sure can picture it (almost makes me cum)! But I'd actually LOVE to read about those locker events....
11/9/25, 2:32 AM
This was not my kind of story but couldn't put it down. I found myself drawn to it.

11/9/25, 8:13 AM
@[anon-868](/user/show/10012980) Wow, well that is a massive compliment! If I managed to get you to enjoy something you normally wouldn't then that is fantastic! Thank you
11/9/25, 1:56 AM
I really loved how you lingered on the description of the eyes showing their intelligence fading, very hot tale.

11/9/25, 8:12 AM
@[MasterJerker](/user/show/50357) Thank you, I am glad you liked it
11/9/25, 7:25 AM
That moment when Mike is hypnotizing himself! So hot!
11/8/25, 6:39 PM
Great opening for a series. It will be a long and kinky evening. I won't get to bed, before I've finnished it.

11/8/25, 10:20 PM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) Oh, nice, I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad it hooked you! Hopefully you have a lot of fun with the chapters that follow, let me know in the comments if anything really gets you going!

11/9/25, 7:00 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) As english isn't my native language, I had to use a translator many times. The translator wasn't good to transport Kink into german. But, that's nit your fault. I read all chapters at one evening. I like the plot and the writiung (as far my english could follow).
11/9/25, 5:56 AM
Wow you have two more chapters already written; I don't know if you've looked at your word count lately but you've written a novel already. Congrats!
11/9/25, 4:17 AM
hope to see this one continued!