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Jun 10, 2018
IvorySilk
6/11/18, 3:55 AM
@Lenny I'm glad you enjoyed the change up. I'll do another Romera Manor soon, but I didn't want to seem like I only write one thing. XD And I'm glad you appreciated the diversity, cause that's something I personally felt we could use more of around here. @Anon I googled the 3% and came up with a TV series. If that's what you're referring to, I actually haven't watched it, but I'm not surprised that someone else came up with the same puzzle. It was literally the first thing that came to my mind when I thought computers, lol.
Anonymous
6/11/18, 3:53 AM
While a little shorter than the 1st too, those are definitely just as hot, hope this series don’t ends soon
Anonymous
6/11/18, 3:40 AM
So glad for you to keep this is story, this chapter was pretty hot, keep they coming!
Jun 10, 2018
Anonymous
6/11/18, 2:56 AM
I hope you liked the 3%. I noticed the puzzle from there
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:42 AM
I like the muscle growth and that he kept his mind intact. Muscles and brains - very sexy!
bitchyboo19 (snapchat)
6/11/18, 1:28 AM
I need more!!! Please let me know when you update again! ...and Hopefully it is like 20 chapters tomorrow!
blankbot
6/11/18, 12:53 AM
PLEASE continue this story!
Max
6/11/18, 12:04 AM
Can't wait! I'm honestly really enjoying your storytelling - you really have a great sense of narrative flow that keeps the reader interested and a knack for characterization and dialogue. Of course the idea is super hot but it's a well-told story above all. Keep having fun with it!
6/10/18, 11:53 PM
Hiya Max. I want to keep this going just building in some other people as well as adding a few twists. Trust me the transformation stuff will still be there. I have plans for Mack and Jimmy don't worry. As well as Saul.
Max
6/10/18, 11:51 PM
Interesting! You're really good at writing exposition in a way that seems natural, same as in the earlier chapters. Retconning a character like this into the story is definitely a surprise but I see it opening up a lot of story possibilities. But I really hope we'll get a look at Mack and Jimmy's new lives as Priapus Pictures exclusives sooner rather than later. And I hope bringing Saul Bennett to justice doesn't bring the hot transformation fun here to too soon a conclusion. Are you looking to wrap it up in the next chapter or keep things going?